Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Moments

Captive of honesty
Lifestyle of modesty
Can't lie to despite thee

Feelings sing
Voices ring
But emotions paint the skin
Circle the eyes the deepest gems

Vision comprehends
Mystery understands
Moments never end or begin


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14 comments:

  1. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comFebruary 2, 2011 at 7:08 PM

    Misty, I'm going to have to read this one a couple of times. Each time I go over it, I get something different. Hmmm...contemplation over meanings:)

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  2. Rachel HoytFebruary 2, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    Beautiful and profound... moments never end or begin...

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  3. deeplywrittenFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    Ha-ha! Awesome news Mary!

    Words that make you think! That is a compliment to me....so thank you. So much better than you not even finishing it, or painting anything of your own from it.

    My intention is just a moment. Especially moment look through and at someone's eyes. The moments that seem to be the depth of time, and are timeless. Especially, the moments words can't describe.

    Thanks for coming over! And for the awesome comment!
    Misty

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  4. deeplywrittenFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    Rachel!

    Thank you for such a kind compliment. That is the beauty of moments for me!

    Misty

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  5. S. Susan DeborahFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    I just loved this. The last line, my god! "Moments never end or begin" -- moments are just there. So very true. So much profoundness in just that one line, Misty.

    Like Mary, I read and reread this piece a couple of times. But you don't want me filling up space on every interpretation I made.

    Looking forward to more.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  6. deeplywrittenFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    Susan!

    Thank you for coming over, and putting my words into meaning! Moments are just there! Too often I feel people try to rush time or label time. But, when we look back...we remember the moments.

    Oh I love to ramble! And converse :)
    Misty

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  7. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    so...moments never end or begin, they just are...what we make them, how we remember them, to do with them what we may, in our own time, in our own mind.
    Great Misty...now you've got me doin' it! Stop it!

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  8. Savira GuptaFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    No beginning or end to emotions they are continuos on going always being felt by the being. Beautiful

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  9. BongoFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    "emotions paint the skin" emotions paint me... emotions show me....emotion is the moment that never begins nor never ends....emotion , I see you Misty ...As always ..XOXOXOXO

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  10. Finding One's WayFebruary 2, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    Feelings sing remind me of our inner children free to sing with joy and laughter in our heart. Inspirational and thought provoking.

    ~Jessica

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  11. deeplywrittenFebruary 3, 2011 at 5:39 AM

    haha! Mary,

    Look at you! You go! And you say you don't get poetry! Awesome comment. :)

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  12. alejandro guzmanFebruary 3, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    I don't get it.

    HAHA just joshing I think? No I don't get it! Unless I think, mmmm, unless my emotions lead me to where I want to or want not to go? Emotions are a real killer of life. Try not to follow unless you know the ending.

    Just Me A

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  13. deeplywrittenFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    ha-ha. A,

    you got something, now my intention not at all. But, I think you have a representation of your feelings and emotions. These things are personal. I try to stay open minded.

    Thanks for the comment.

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  14. UnknownFebruary 11, 2011 at 8:50 PM

    All human experiences will be relived ad infinitum. A thought provoking piece.

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