Tuesday, January 25, 2011

The Common Humanity

Welcome flesh!
Birth of requirement: you must die
The common humanity

Human's begin with endings,
The middle waits to be chosen.
People decide the medium;
time's only promise to you.

Youthful blindness,
discovered in the purest energy.
Wished upon parental guidance,
but your village may be your only guarantee.

The novelty of body,
married to breath;
committed to death
Life's celebration of you.

The art of behavior,
covered in personality;
laying beneath—the soul's story.

Chapters of accessories,
I browse the eyes of every novel I see.
So many visions paint one scene.
Belief is the hyphenation to fiction.








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6 comments:

  1. alejandro guzmanJanuary 25, 2011 at 10:39 PM

    deeply written..
    Some times we can get lost within the chapters of someones eyes

    Cheers

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  2. deeplywrittenJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    Alejandro,

    Exactly! I count on that. I love to get lost in the eyes of peaceful, love-filled souls! But, that is an art itself! Ha-ha, you can get lost in say.....my eyes...eyes with the depth of nothing....

    Thanks for stopping by!
    Misty

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  3. Jorie PacliJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:45 PM

    Yet another beautiful poem. I like the message of the second stanza..:)

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  4. Lisette BrodeyJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:57 PM

    Beautifully written, Misty. I really appreciate the layers of your insight.

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  5. deeplywrittenJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:19 AM

    Jorie and Lisette!

    Thank you so much for your comments and kind words. It means the world to me...to have my words in meaning in someone's thoughts.

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  6. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comJanuary 27, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    Beautiful poem. The message in the 2nd stanza of living is what you, yourself, make it especially caught my mind.

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